Marijuana Speech

In my speech, I believe I did a lot better than the last speech about fried chicken. I should have not said "my name is Warren Herring". In this speech I still used words like "uh" and "um". I believe that I could have stated more facts and talked about how it can help as a medicine more. Overall I think I did a decent job. It could have been a lot better. Another thing I could have done to make my speech better is make more eye contact with the audience instead of looking at my note cards continuously. Insted of almost explaining how to make it into a smokeable substance, I could have used that time to talk about how else it could be used. Overall I think my speech was decent, I still have a long way to go. But I do believe it was alot better than my last speech.